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Friday, May 18, 2012

Updated shot


Hey everyone!!

I made some changes please give me some feedback on my lip-sync, eyebrows, eye lids and everything else. I feel something still need to change for my eyebrow but I am not sure since I have been working on it for too long. Therefore, I need some fresh eyes to help me out here.

Thanks a lot!!!
I hope everyone has good process on their shots!!

1 comment:

  1. Looking better. For some reason it's still cutting off the beginning of the video though. I think the eyebrows are too busy. They are moving a lot. When the eyebrows move they should be moving to another pose and they should stay there for a while or else it looks like a twitch. Try simplifying the brows to just a few main poses, only changing them a lot on big beats. You can still have her raise them but do it only once, perhaps on "Everyone" to accent the beat and then keep them up till she turns after she hears the noise. As it is the brow is just in constant motion and doesn't stay in a position long enough to really be read and have impact. Also, the fact that she raises her brow a couple of times diminishes the impact of it. If you save it for one special moment it will have greater intensity. Eye shape will follow the brows, so revise that as you simplify the brows.

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