I think for this one main thing is that the rim light is a little to strong on some shots especially on first and last it creates a glowing effect around her head especially her chin. The position of the key needs to be adjusted a bit as well maybe move it more towards the front of the char and just create a separate light to illuminate the fireplace a bit. Watch out for the strong diagonal shadow on the fireplace, it looks out of place, as well as the shadow behind the chair, maybe consider turning off the shadows for the chair or repositioning. Fill light looks like it is in about the right position
I think for this one main thing is that the rim light is a little to strong on some shots especially on first and last it creates a glowing effect around her head especially her chin. The position of the key needs to be adjusted a bit as well maybe move it more towards the front of the char and just create a separate light to illuminate the fireplace a bit. Watch out for the strong diagonal shadow on the fireplace, it looks out of place, as well as the shadow behind the chair, maybe consider turning off the shadows for the chair or repositioning. Fill light looks like it is in about the right position
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