I have been working the bits for fast almost almost three hours and I also keep changing postion and key frames around. So, I decided to upload it up here to get some feedback for the dialogue bits and I will add lips later.
maybe put it a small head turn when she says boys and make the look faster when she hears the knocking.
Overall though Since you have most of your head movements in it would be a good idea to really start doing the face especially since yours is a closeup the facial expressions and dialogue are going to be whats most important here and what people are going to notice.
The move right after "intimidating everyone" and the pose she settles into doesn't seem natural to me. The settled pose feels a little off balance (I know that is weird to say when we're seeing so little of the body, but that's how it feels to me.) and the head seems a little crooked. As for the movement, I'd say it's a little too extreme for starters. Remember that when she's taking up this much screen space she needs to move less not more. Maybe try a less extreme way to get her to the final pose, or give the motion more time to get there so it feels less jarring and sudden. Other than that, I agree with everything that Anthony said. Make sure to keep eye line in mind as you work on the facial expressions.
When she looks down after "intimidating" that seems a big to extreme I would tone that down a bunch. The bottom of her hear goes off screen for a little too on that motion. As same for when she come to the camera tone that down a bit. Like Raquel said we need to simply things even more...were all making our shot way too complicated.
maybe put it a small head turn when she says boys and make the look faster when she hears the knocking.
ReplyDeleteOverall though Since you have most of your head movements in it would be a good idea to really start doing the face especially since yours is a closeup the facial expressions and dialogue are going to be whats most important here and what people are going to notice.
The move right after "intimidating everyone" and the pose she settles into doesn't seem natural to me. The settled pose feels a little off balance (I know that is weird to say when we're seeing so little of the body, but that's how it feels to me.) and the head seems a little crooked. As for the movement, I'd say it's a little too extreme for starters. Remember that when she's taking up this much screen space she needs to move less not more. Maybe try a less extreme way to get her to the final pose, or give the motion more time to get there so it feels less jarring and sudden. Other than that, I agree with everything that Anthony said. Make sure to keep eye line in mind as you work on the facial expressions.
ReplyDeleteWhen she looks down after "intimidating" that seems a big to extreme I would tone that down a bunch. The bottom of her hear goes off screen for a little too on that motion. As same for when she come to the camera tone that down a bit. Like Raquel said we need to simply things even more...were all making our shot way too complicated.
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