I like this. There's only two things you should fix. The layout of the room means that the cradle is actually approximately where the camera is right now, so when she points and looks to the right she's looking and pointing to the corner of the room and not the baby. If she were to turn and point either towards the camera or just a little to the left of the camera, that would link up better with the geography of the scene, and make it hook with Chris' scene better since if I recall correctly Chis's angle has her coming towards and a little to the left of the camera. The only other thing is that she kinda crowds the right side of the screen and directs attention out of it. This will be mitigated a bit when you move the pointing, but we should also shift the camera a little so that chair is a little to the left of center. That way when she moves screen right as she gets up the composition will have more space to breathe. That last fix doesn't need to be done for the animatic unless you have the time and inclination towards doing it though, we'll just keep it in mind when we set up the angles in the scene.
Great points nic I definatly agree with that, I'm not going to have time to change the animatic but we will have to make a note to remember to have her point towards the camera etc.
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I like this. There's only two things you should fix. The layout of the room means that the cradle is actually approximately where the camera is right now, so when she points and looks to the right she's looking and pointing to the corner of the room and not the baby. If she were to turn and point either towards the camera or just a little to the left of the camera, that would link up better with the geography of the scene, and make it hook with Chris' scene better since if I recall correctly Chis's angle has her coming towards and a little to the left of the camera. The only other thing is that she kinda crowds the right side of the screen and directs attention out of it. This will be mitigated a bit when you move the pointing, but we should also shift the camera a little so that chair is a little to the left of center. That way when she moves screen right as she gets up the composition will have more space to breathe. That last fix doesn't need to be done for the animatic unless you have the time and inclination towards doing it though, we'll just keep it in mind when we set up the angles in the scene.
ReplyDeleteGreat points nic I definatly agree with that, I'm not going to have time to change the animatic but we will have to make a note to remember to have her point towards the camera etc.
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