You might want to change the movement of the glass hand when she does the "old age" line since the movement is similar to, but opposing the main hand and it distracts from and diminishes the power of the main movement by splitting the direction of the force of the motion. If she's twisting towards her left for the old age hand gesture her drink hand would likely follow in that direction rather than gesture outwardly like that. It would also help set up your "marriage" point.
When you get a chance, could you post up a playblast with the keys in stepped so we can better see where the keyed poses are? I know you like to block in spline, but it makes critiquing a little more difficult since we aren't certain whats posed and what's just the splined curves acting odd. Not asking you to change the way you block, just think it might be easier for us to critique if you changed the curves to stepped before playblasting, you can undo the change right after the playblast.
Also the video file is in the server in team Ulta called shots for crit
ReplyDeleteYou might want to change the movement of the glass hand when she does the "old age" line since the movement is similar to, but opposing the main hand and it distracts from and diminishes the power of the main movement by splitting the direction of the force of the motion. If she's twisting towards her left for the old age hand gesture her drink hand would likely follow in that direction rather than gesture outwardly like that. It would also help set up your "marriage" point.
ReplyDeleteWhen you get a chance, could you post up a playblast with the keys in stepped so we can better see where the keyed poses are? I know you like to block in spline, but it makes critiquing a little more difficult since we aren't certain whats posed and what's just the splined curves acting odd. Not asking you to change the way you block, just think it might be easier for us to critique if you changed the curves to stepped before playblasting, you can undo the change right after the playblast.