For your shot we discussed a few things
Overall the character feels too relaxed and needs to be tensed up a bit especially in the shoulders (almost like she is doing shrugs at gym think tension) This will help connect up the shots into feeling like the same character.
For the posture we were thinking it would connect up with the rest of our shots if she was more hunched over, for the way she moves we have in mind something along the lines of gorilla meets Igor from Frankenstein
The weight shift seems a bit too fast at the hips feels like it should be simplified
She should look sooner when she says the lines "marriage" also on that bit it might look better if she did more of an under or swoop over and craning motion
She looks down and away a bit too much it would be better that if you are going to have her look down that it was something that happened a little more quickly.
Watch both hands as they appear to be getting stuck in place in a few places especially in the "old age" part in the cup hand
The head feels disconnected with the body in terms of movement, also would be better if head tilting was used to accent certain bits more
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