So I changed the blocking on the walk a bit and changed the end pose to better match up what cris is going for, any crits welcome and needed. Ill be working on this more tommorrow
The timing on the steps is a little even. Make sure each step isn't taking the same amount of time. Also, the wrist movement at the beginning is a little too isolated from the rest of the body. I know it's a small motion, but there should be some minor additional movement in the elbow and shoulder at least to support it. Finally, the new pointing, while better matched with Chris, doesn't read. It looks too much like the movements for the steps which just happened. Maybe have her pause a bit after her last step before doing it, or give it a different anticipation, but right now the motion is getting lost.
the last pose is a little weird, maybe turn the hips more to her left shoulder is more toward the camera and maybe not so hunch over. Also raid her glass hand up a little more and that would match better with mine. Unless like we talked about you are going to add a little settle where she straightens up a tad bit.
The timing on the steps is a little even. Make sure each step isn't taking the same amount of time. Also, the wrist movement at the beginning is a little too isolated from the rest of the body. I know it's a small motion, but there should be some minor additional movement in the elbow and shoulder at least to support it. Finally, the new pointing, while better matched with Chris, doesn't read. It looks too much like the movements for the steps which just happened. Maybe have her pause a bit after her last step before doing it, or give it a different anticipation, but right now the motion is getting lost.
ReplyDeletethe last pose is a little weird, maybe turn the hips more to her left shoulder is more toward the camera and maybe not so hunch over. Also raid her glass hand up a little more and that would match better with mine. Unless like we talked about you are going to add a little settle where she straightens up a tad bit.
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